By using the teachers comments of he or she puts on the essay. After I read my paper over I can figure out what he wants out of it when I resubmit an essay. And I fix all fragments and run on sentences and punctuation marks that need it. Like to resubmit all work just for my benefit and for the better grade such as I will continue to do in the future.
How I fix my mistakes
April 17, 2009 by jbachichawhat I got out of engilsh 0750
April 16, 2009 by jbachichaSo I got out of English 0750 is that 0950 is going to be harder! I think its preparing me for 0950 in all kinds of ways such as using correct grammar and punctuation and spelling. How its doing it is because the professor is letting us revise work as we turn it in. I like to revise my work to show that i can do a better job on the next one. My goal is to not have to revise any work at all. As soon as I get that done I am still going to read the teachers notes and take in his or hers advise.
How does revising improve my writing skills.
April 15, 2009 by jbachichaI think revising improves my writing skills in a whole lot of drifferent ways. The first way is that I see what the teacher says about my writing, then I go and look at the score he gave me. Then I have someone else read it and explane what he or she is trying to get across to me. Then I start to revise the work and keep in mind that I am try to get what the professor want out of it. By adding all the errors and miss spelled words and grammar errors I can get a good idea of what he wants. And that’s is to correct it and see what I did wrong so next time I write I can catch it before I turn it in for a grade.
should I revised my work?
April 15, 2009 by jbachichaAnd the answer is yes! You should always revise your work. Just for the fact is you learn more form the notes the teacher leaves on the essay you wrote. I like to revise my work just because I want to do better for myself. And for the better grade as well, but mostly to improve my writing skills. I like to revise work also to improve my grade and to see if I can do better then the first time. It usually takes me one or two times to get the grade I want.
I like to revise my work
April 14, 2009 by jbachichaSometimes i don’t like to revise my work, but most times i do it to get the better grade. I mostly revise it just because it makes me feel better about my self and to show the professor that I look at my work and turn it the revised work. Also just so that i can get the better grade for the assignment I just turn in. So i like to work hard to turn good writing but there is always something wrong with it so I revise it to the teachers standers.
Whats wrong with it
April 13, 2009 by jbachichaMost of us like to revise old work and get a higher grade. Well whats wrong with it? Exactly nothing we do it because we want to improve our skills in writing. And of course the higher grade. The only reason I do it is to prove to my self that I can get the better grade and learn more from the teachers notes. They let us do it because they want to show us what we did and didn’t do right. That’s the only logic I see in revising work besides the grade. I am pround to say I do it all the time just for my self. If I think I can do better I will!